Thursday, February 08, 2007

haiku-cross


It just keeps getting better and better. This one's being planned by cyclingdave. Jonny S, make sure the haiku-master in Altona gets word of this one.

One question: isn't it 5-7-5?

4 comments:

halloewen said...

maybe eastern european haikus are 7-5-7

that dave said...

i missed that in editing. my bad. first rule of hiaku cross: ignore the mess of anarchistic, artistic dynamism and seek the purity of the form. wait till you see the other rules.

and i think that is a bonus lap for keen-eyed alberto.

halloewen said...

actually mr. dr. caught that one

Anonymous said...

Dave's always had a problem with numbers..he's just a 3 dressed up as a 9 anyway...